Wednesday, April 24, 2013

Final Draft essay 3


Cassie Poindexter
Dr. Kenneth Kerr
EN101-4
10 April 2013

The Arts Are a Must

Over the past few years, our economy has suffered immensely and several people are searching for ways to save money and cut back. The school system is no different. When searching for an area to make cuts, the board of education often jumps to the arts. However, what they don’t realize is that the arts programs in schools allow for a creative outlet during the typical school day. It gives students the option to be creative and gives them time away from the textbooks. It may seem like the obvious area to make cuts in, but if schools continue to cut the art programs from the curriculum, scores will decrease, drop our rates will increase, and the chances available for the students to be creative will be limited.

Art classes go beyond painting a picture or singing a song. The arts actually incorporate different skills that can't be taught in a history or a science class. Most art classes go deep into the cultural behind the arts as well as teach the kids how to use creative and critical thinking skills which can be used outside of an art classroom (Hurley 2). Because the art classes supply each student with such a range of knowledge, if it’s eliminated from schools, kids will be missing out on different learning opportunities. Studies show that when art classes are dropped, grades are dropped as well. The College Entrance Examination Board from Princeton, N.J., came to the conclusion that students who has a background in music performance and art scored higher on their SAT. They point out, "Students in music performance scored 57 points higher on the verbal and 41 points higher on the math, and students in music appreciation scored 63 points higher on verbal and 44 points higher on the math" (Dumbing Down). When these facts are presented, it’s hard to deny that the arts have a positive impact on how students do overall in school. 

In addition to grades dropping, art classes being cut are resulting in more violence in schools as well as dropout rates increasing. The ultimate goal of the board of education is to cut back and not spend more money. However, when arts are being taken out, more teachers are being hired to to execute the disciplinary issues that are rising in schools (Hurley). Art and music serves as an outlet for certain kids, like sports do for others. It gives them the chance to release emotions without using drugs or being involved in gangs. Martin Rayala, an art, media and design consultant for the Department of Public Instruction said, “Within two to three years, every school that cuts arts showed a decrease in morale and attendance and an increase in vandalism and disruptions, and within three years most of them had to add extensive disciplinary staff to account for the problems that were created by not providing the full range of experiences that human beings need” (Hurley). Rayala is one of many who not only believe, but have proven that dropout rates in school have a direct correlation with the cuts of art classes. 

Aside from the data and research, art classes help kids express themselves. It gives them a chance to be hands on and not always having to follow rules. Instead, students are able to make their own rules and just paint a piece of their own or sing whatever their heart desires. Kenneth Kerr is the chair of the English department at FCC he has a doctorate in education and is a former elementary school teacher. He expresses the importance of arts in public education,

"When we look back at our history and our culture, we don't talk about how well historical figures did on standardized tests or learning performance indicators. We look at the challenges they face, the creative solutions they devised, and the ways they expressed themselves. The arts--music, literature, drama, painting, sculpture--are the means by which the emotions associated with the struggle are expressed and preserved. Students need to learn to express themselves when they are children so that they can better express themselves as leaders and stewards of our culture and history." 

Without the arts, students would be stuck with their heads in books all day, memorizing math equations and grammar rules. A well balanced education is necessary for anybody who wants to be successful. The key word is balanced. If the arts are taken out of the picture, things will become lopsided. A piece of the puzzle will be missing. Just like if math or English was taken out of the curriculum, students wouldn't be getting the knowledge that is needed in the future. Creativity shouldn't be pushed aside; instead it should be part of every student’s childhood. 

 

Works Cited
Hurley, Ryan. "Cuts in Art Programs Leave Sour Note in Schools." 14 Nov. 2008 
http://www.weac.org/capitol/2003-04/jun04/arts.htm.

"Dumbing Down, the Dwindling Funding of the Arts." 14 Nov. 2008 
<http://worldmusiccentral.org/article.php/2005030922083613>.

Kerr, Kenneth. Personal interview. 20 April 2013.

Second draft essay 3

Cassie Poindexter

Over the past few years, our economy has suffered immensely and everybody is searching for ways to save money and cut back. The school system is no different. When searching for an area to make cuts, the board of education always jumps to the arts. However, what they doesn't realize is that the arts programs in schools allow for a creative outlet during the typical school day. It gives kids the option to be creative and gives them time away from the textbooks. It may seem like the obvious area to make cuts in, but if schools continue to cut the art programs from the curriculum, scores will decrease, drop our rates will increase, and the chances available for kids to be creative will be limited.

Art classes go beyond painting a picture or singing a song. The arts actually incorporate different skills that can't be taught in a history or a science class. Most art classes go deep into the cultural behind the arts as well as teach the kids how to use creative and critical thinking skills which can be used outside of an art classroom (Hurley, 2). Because the art classes supply each student with such a range of knowledge, if its eliminated from schools, kids will be missing out on different learning opportunities. Studies show that when art classes are dropped, grades are dropped as well. The College Entrance Examination Board from Princeton, N.J., came to the conclusion that students who has a background in music performance and art scored higher on their SAT. "Students in music performance scored 57 points higher on the verbal and 41 points higher on the math, and students in music appreciation scored 63 points higher on verbal and 44 points higher on the math" (Dumbing Down). When these facts are presented, its hard to deny that the arts have a positive impact on how students do overall in school.

In addition to grades dropping, art classes being cut are resulting in more violence in schools as well as drop out rates increasing. The ultimate goal of the board of education is to cut back and not spend more money. However, when arts are being taken out, more teachers are being hired to to execute the disciplinary issues that are rising in schools (Hurley). Art and music serves as an outlet for certain kids, like sports do for others. It gives them the chance to release emotions without using drugs or being involved in gangs. Martin Rayala, an art, media and design consultant for the Department of Public Instruction said, “Within two to three years, every school that cuts arts showed a decrease in morale and attendance and an increase in vandalism and disruptions, and within three years most of them had to add extensive disciplinary staff to account for the problems that were created by not providing the full range of experiences that human beings need” (Hurley). Rayala is one of many who not only believe, but have proven that drop out rates in school have a direct correlation with the cuts of art classes.

Aside from the data and research, art classes help kids express themselves. It gives them a chance to be hands on and not always having to follow rules. Instead, students are able to make their own rules and just paint a piece of their own or sing whatever their heart desires. Kenneth Kerr is the chair of the English department at FCC he has a doctorate in education and is a former elementary school teacher. He expresses the importance of arts in public education, "When we look back at our history and our culture, we don't talk about how well historical figures did on standardized tests or learning performance indicators. We look at the challenges they faces, the creative solutions they devised, and the ways they expressed themselves. The arts--music, literature, drama, painting, sculpture--are the means by which the emotions associated with the struggle are expressed and preserved. Students need to learn to express themselves when they are children so that they can better express themselves as leaders and stewards of our culture and history."

Without the arts, students would be stuck with their heads in books all day, memorizing math equations and grammar rules. A well balanced education is necessary for anybody who wants to be successful. The key word is balanced. If you take the arts out of the picture, everything will become lopsided. A piece of the puzzle will be missing. Just like if math or english was taken out of the curriculum, students wouldn't be getting the knowledge that is needed in the future. Creativity shouldn't be pushed aside, instead it should be part of every students childhood.


Works Cited:

Hurley, Ryan. "Cuts in Art Programs Leave Sour Note in Schools." 14 Nov. 2008
<http://www.weac.org/capitol/2003-04/jun04/arts.htm>.

"Dumbing Down, the Dwindling Funding of the Arts." 14 Nov. 2008
<http://worldmusiccentral.org/article.php/2005030922083613>.

Organizing! essay 3

Finding a focus - The negative effects of the arts being cut
Thesis - It may seem like the obvious area to make cuts in, but if schools continue to cut the art programs from the curriculum, scores will decrease, drop our rates will increase, and the chances available for kids to be creative will be limited.
Quotes -

  • "Students in music performance scored 57 points higher on the verbal and 41 points higher on the math, and students in music appreciation scored 63 points higher on verbal and 44 points higher on the math" (Dumbing Down).
  • “Within two to three years, every school that cuts arts showed a decrease in morale and attendance and an increase in vandalism and disruptions, and within three years most of them had to add extensive disciplinary staff to account for the problems that were created by not providing the full range of experiences that human beings need” (Hurley).
  • "When we look back at our history and our culture, we don't talk about how well historical figures did on standardized tests or learning performance indicators. We look at the challenges they faces, the creative solutions they devised, and the ways they expressed themselves. The arts--music, literature, drama, painting, sculpture--are the means by which the emotions associated with the struggle are expressed and preserved. Students need to learn to express themselves when they are children so that they can better express themselves as leaders and stewards of our culture and history."

What did my research tell me? essay 3

  • The arts is usually the first to go
  • In art classes, you learn more then art. Math as well as other subjects are incorperated into the subject
  • Grades are dropping
  • SAT rates decrease because of the arts being cut
  • Kids lack creativty

What do I still need to know? essay 3

The specific effects of the arts cuts from schools?
How studnts benefit from art classes?
Why the arts are always the first to be cut?
How they make the executive decisions on the board

Monday, April 8, 2013

What do I already know? essay 3

1. First classes to go are the arts
2. Kids need art classes to get time away from the books
3. The Board of education make the cuts
4. Cutting arts due to financial issues

essay 3 draft

Cassie Poindexter




The board of education always jumps to the arts when searching for classes to cut, but what they doesn't realize is that the arts programs in schools allow for a creative outlet during the typical school day. It gives kids the option to be creative and time away from the textbooks. It may seem like the obvious area to make cuts in, however if schools continue to cut the arts programs from the curriculum, scores will decrease, drop our rates will increase, and the chances available for kids to be creative will be limited.
Art classes go beyond painting a picture or singing a song. The arts actually incorporate different skills that can't be taught in a history or a science class. Most art classes go deep into the cultural behind the arts as well as teach the kids how to use creative and critical thinking skills which can be
used outside of an art classroom (Hurley, 2). Because the art classes supply each student with such a
range of knowledge, if you take the class out of the equation, art won't be the only thing missing.
Studies show that when art classes are dropped, grades are dropped as well. The College Entrance
Examination Board from Princeton, N.J., came to the conclusion that, “Students with
coursework/experience in music performance and music appreciation scored higher on the SAT:
students in music performance scored 57 points higher on the verbal and 41 points higher on the
math, and students in music appreciation scored 63 points higher on verbal and 44 points higher on
the math, than did students with no arts participation” (Dumbing Down).
___________. When the whole picture is looked at, its obvious that grades aren't the only thing
decking due to the cuts of art classes.
Art and music is an outlet for kids. It gives them the chance to release emotions without using
drugs or being involved in gangs.


Martin Rayala, an art, media and design consultant for the Department of Public Instruction said,
“Within two to three years, every school that cuts arts showed a decrease in morale and attendance
and an increase in vandalism and disruptions, and within three years most of them had to add
extensive disciplinary staff to account for the problems that were created by not providing the full
range of experiences that human beings need” (Hurley 2).

Hurley, Ryan. "Cuts in Art Programs Leave Sour Note in Schools." 14 Nov. 2008
<http://www.weac.org/capitol/2003-04/jun04/arts.htm>.


Kenneth Kerr is the chair of the English department at FCC he has a doctorate in education and is a former elementary school teacher. He expresses the importance in public education, "When we look back at our history and our culture, we don't talk about how well historical figures did on standardized tests or learning performance indicators. We look at the challenges they faces, the creative solutions they devised, and the ways they expressed themselves. The arts--music, literature, drama, painting, sculpture--are the means by which the emotions associated with the struggle are expressed and preserved. Students need to learn to express themselves when they are children so that they can better express themselves as leaders and stewards of our culture and history."


"Dumbing Down, the Dwindling Funding of the Arts." 14 Nov. 2008
<http://worldmusiccentral.org/article.php/2005030922083613>.